Yeah... I came up with an idea for a playable specie. Originally it was an idea for a book that I was going to write, but I decided to see if it could get on Ramath-lehi... Anyway, before I post... I want to make sure you lot were still taking suggestion on playable species. I'm also kind of skittish on the history and reproduction and social life. Oh, I have one question in mind, does it have to be a sub-species of pendragon?
1. We're always open to suggestions for new species - there's just no guarantee that they'll be accepted and added to the database. 2. Nope. It doesn't have to be a sub-species of pendragons.
Ok, thank you for getting rid of that fear... Anyways... Here's the Physical Description... Name: Fo'roxa Physical Description: This species has fox like features that usually has up to two or nine tails. Their eye color are mostly yellow, green, black, blue, silver, and light red, their fur color is usually a two way combo, which consists with orange and white, black and white, red and white, red and yellow, teal and white, and brown and white. The ears are either short to medium. The females are usually five feet to maximum of seven feet tall. Their tails are majority of fluffiness. These female have a slender body, but some females although thin, are well built. Females are treated with high respect. Males are usually six feet to maximum of eight feet. The maleÂ’s tails are usually thinner than the females, but still have that hint of fluffiness. Their bodies are usually fit and well built. They are respected, but not as much as the females.
I like the idea of a fox-anthropomorphic creature. However, I think you should understand that if you want your ideas to be implemented into the game, they must be extremely detailed. Good idea though, just try to add more description. You might want to consider the following: ~ age: how long do these critters live? ~ paws: are they built in a way that they can use the same devices that pendragons can? ~ diet: I assume they would primarily eat meat, but it never hurts to clarify this and add some more information. Also, you might be interested in talking more about how they shred and devour their prey. ~ weight: giving the average weight of one of these guys is always helpful. ~ stance: do they walk on all four feet/paws or are they bipedal? These are a few of the things that you might consider adding to their physical description. Good luck ;)
Hmmm... Yes, I will admit that I'm still some what a novice in writing and describing species and other things... and I thank you for give me more ideas to add to the description... I'm going to go back in my corner and start add more to it.
Ok, edited the description a little and had a friend look over it. Sorry, for the double post... anyways, Physical Description Rough Draft 2... Physical Description: This species has fox like features that usually has anywhere from two to nine tails. Their eye color are predominantly yellow, green, black, blue, silver, and light red, their fur color is usually a two way combo, which consists with orange and white, black and white, red and white, red and yellow, teal and white, and brown and white. The ears are short to medium. Their diet depends on the FoÂ’roxa individual, but primarily they are omnivores. YouÂ’ll mostly find FoÂ’roxa in bipedal form, but there are some who can be found in quadpedal form. Their fore-paws have long fingers and opposable thumb letting them able to use the same devices as pendragons when in their bipedal form, but in their quadpedal state they have paws that resemble feline base feet. On their paws, they have short claws that are black as coal. The females are usually five feet to maximum of seven feet tall. Their tails are majority of thickness. The females weigh in around hundred and thirty-seven pounds to hundred and sixty-five pounds and usually live up to seventy-five to eighty years of age. These female have a slender body, but some females although thin, are well built. Females are treated with high respect. Males are usually six feet to maximum of eight feet. The maleÂ’s tails are usually thinner than the females, but still have that hint of fluffiness. A male FoÂ’roxa usually weighs around hundred and fifty-eight pound to hundred and ninety-three pounds and can live up to seventy to seventy-five years of age. Their bodies are usually fit and well built. They are respected, but not as much as the females.
Not bad. We will be eager to read your final version of the Fo'roxa's physical description as well as descriptions of their social behavior, history, etc. Keep up the good work.
Just wanting to add this in: Don't worry about coloring, especially since yours is so extremely rainbowish. Unless the color is specific (i.e: This race usually has dark colors black, brown, grey etc) or something to that detail, it's not really necessary. You'll notice that there will be every manner of color entitled to the species when people start making characters for it. Physical specifics are also nice details to add. Specifically, what makes them different from the ordinary pendragon and what traits do they all share? I hope that helps for your physical descriptions. It sounds workable so far.
I agree with Skylink, it does sound workable. Though I'm having a hard time trying to figure out just what makes this suggested species unique. Unless they're social structures are completely different or something (why are the females more respected?). At the moment they just seem like a family strain of Lukuo who just happen to have multiple tails. So yes, if you develop them further I think I'd be much more interested. :)
