I shall say it now for I said it then, "Forgive me lord for I have sinned." Oh how did this happen, how did it begin? I remember of his death and when. I shall tell you of this man now dead, For now he has a hole in his head, For now he has been spilt upon the mud. The man I killed in cold blood. Did this man have those who mourn? And from this world his life I torn? Should I have listened to his tearful cries, As I put a round between his eyes. A toast to this man that no one knows. For back to the earth his body goes. Oh why did I give this man a toast? For he was a man but now a ghost. So after I have told you of how I sinned After I told you of his life now in end. I shall I say it now for I said it then, "Forgive me lord for I have sinned again." Critique and reply please. Wicked Something wicked this way comes As the soldiers beat their drums The sinners and their evil ways Coming now the end of days Can you hear it on the wind Soon it comes our very end As the stars fall out the sky Can you hear the angels' cry You try think of times of old As your blood it runs so cold So do you have a last Request Before your body’s put to rest You pray to god, You try to run He has said this must be done For we’ve been twisted by our greed And the Angels they agreed See it now the Earth does burn And Now to Heaven we do turn As Hell’s Army beat their drums Something wicked this way comes
Though it is not quite clear I am guessing this is the 'poetry thread' are the poems posted your own or just copies / revisions of other peoples works? Story teller’s song Some one talking/singing to a Story Teller’s statue painted to look almost real Tell me storyteller I plea Why are you so lonely? When the days never pass you by Time never seems to fly With all of these passers by Tell me- Tell me a story Tell me anything you can Tell me about the poor boy Who became the richest in the land Tell me- Tell me a story Tell me anything at all Tell me about the giant wall And of the trees that grow really tall Tell me- Tell me right or tell me wrong no one knows because it’s your song Tell me- Tell me fast or tell me slow tell me all the things you know tell me what’s running through your mind the gems in the rough all hard to find Tell me- Tell me all the special scenes Tell me about kings and queens And all of the in-betweens Princes and peasants with all their dreams Tell me- Tell me what it is you see Tell me all that was to be In this world of the triple moon Why did it have to end so soon? Tell me- Silver Dragon<br /><br />-- less than a minute ago --<br /><br />double post I know I am evil. <insert evil laugh here> I could… I could have died the other day When thoughts and feelings were astray But fortune has kept me here Through fast thinking and bridled fear I could have slept the other day And smoke would hath stole my breath away But it was the dogs I did hear Warning me danger was quite near I could have chosen not to stay But then I’d never have saved the day And thinking that I shed a tear Wishing only that you were here Silver Dragon
